- Start 3rd shot later - edit so there's no pauses/jumping
- Don't show victim or/and face of villain
- Close up of villain showing identity
- 4th shot earlier
- Edit 6h shot - no pauses
- Sound quality needs improving
- Camera should be steadier, not shaky
- Cut part of walking scene
- No panning - should be over shoulder
- Instead of two-shot, use high angle
- Close up of fire extinguisher
- No 'time traveling'
- Following chair being pushed away
- Sound effect of hit, skull being smashed
What is the most resilient parasite? Bacteria? A virus? An intestinal worm? An idea. Resilient... highly contagious. Once an idea has taken hold of the brain it's almost impossible to eradicate. An idea that is fully formed - fully understood - that sticks; right in there somewhere. - Dom Cobb (Inception)
Friday, 10 December 2010
Edits to preliminary task
After our initial edit, we were given tasks to do and pointers about editing our film to make it more continuous:
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